Published in 1842, this story is an anomaly among Poe’s famous horror tales. Unlike the majority of the other tales, “Pit” does not rely on an element of the supernatural, but on sheer terror stemming from the threat of a slow, imminent and painful death.
The narrator has been accused of an unnamed crime by the terrible Spanish Inquisition. “I saw the lips of the black robed judges”, says the author, who are reading hims his rights and condemning him, yet the author does not hear him. The narrator finds himself in a completely black room after passing out (“swooning”) from the sheer terror of the moment. He proceeds in attempting to figure out the size of the room, during which he passes out again. On awakening, he discovers a pit in the middle of the room, a pit that he barely avoids plummeting into…. Yet again, the narrator passes out, only to awaken and realize that has predicament has changed. He has been strapped bodily to a table. He notices his surroundings, seeing a painting of Father Time on the wall; above, almost imperceptibly, swings a giant pendulum, like that of a clock. Over time, the narrator sees it moving closer…and closer…and closer. It becomes apparent that the narrator is in the arms of death and must devise and escape. Just as the “scimitar” slices through his skin, the narrator escapes falling to the floor. But then, he notices that the room is becoming unbearably hot and the walls are moving in, pushing him towards the pit. “‘Death’ I said, ‘any death but that of the pit!’” he screams. Does he survive? Will he escape from the jaws of hell?
Indeed.
Poe takes a lot of liberties with the historicity of this tale. At the end, he is saved by General Lasalle of Napoleonic fame. As can be deduced, the Spanish Inquisition and the Napoleonic campaigns are separated by hundreds of years. Thus, this continuity is incorrect.
Nevertheless, this is probably my favorite Poe story. Poe really plays with the senses in this piece; vivid images of the pendulum, the “blackness of eternal night encompasses” the narrator throughout, the stifling atmosphere of the Inquisition and the sheer terror of anticipation and a painful death are palpable to the reader. In my case, I hate the dark and I’m kind of scared of knives. On top of that, can you imagine staring above you and watching the instrument of your ultimate destruction move close and closer…..hair-raising. This story effected me physically, on the edge of my seat as the old cliche goes.
And remember, you never expect the Spanish Inquisition!